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Write-good issues from last submit #15

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github-actions bot opened this issue Oct 31, 2024 · 0 comments
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Write-good issues from last submit #15

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Here are some friendly prose warnings from write-good:

In ./module_00/HW_01.md
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ing any phrases such as 'many', 'fewer', 'more important', etc._
                         ^^^^
"many" is a weasel word and can weaken meaning on line 58 at column 180
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- How many ideas came from AI?
      ^^^^
"many" is a weasel word and can weaken meaning on line 95 at column 6
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- How many ideas came from you?
      ^^^^
"many" is a weasel word and can weaken meaning on line 96 at column 6
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- If this work was made by you and another person-not AI-would you need to credi
               ^^^^^^^^
"was made" may be passive voice on line 98 at column 15


In ./module_00/HW_00.md
=============
ing any phrases such as 'many', 'fewer', 'more important', etc._
                         ^^^^
"many" is a weasel word and can weaken meaning on line 45 at column 180
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- How many ideas came from AI?
      ^^^^
"many" is a weasel word and can weaken meaning on line 81 at column 6
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- How many ideas came from you?
      ^^^^
"many" is a weasel word and can weaken meaning on line 82 at column 6
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- If this work was made by you and another person-not AI-would you need to credi
               ^^^^^^^^
"was made" may be passive voice on line 84 at column 15


In ./module_00/README.md
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This course is designed to build expertise in two key areas:
            ^^^^^^^^^^^
"is designed" may be passive voice on line 3 at column 12
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gineering practice takes many forms, but at its core engineers are
                         ^^^^
"many" is a weasel word and can weaken meaning on line 7 at column 27
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ut at its core engineers are
                         ^^^^^^^^^^^
"are
defined" may be passive voice on line 7 at column 65
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can quantify and predict a
                         ^^^^^^^^^^^
"a
number of" is wordy or unneeded on line 11 at column 76
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readers in a manner that is adapted to their
                         ^^^^^^^^^^
"is adapted" may be passive voice on line 17 at column 50
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ent statistical findings clearly and concisely
                         ^^^^^^^
"clearly" is a weasel word and can weaken meaning on line 35 at column 35
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nd social information to validate a design or process
                         ^^^^^^^^
"validate" is wordy or unneeded on line 44 at column 56


In ./module_01/README.md
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reaction. Each effect is created by some cause. 
                      ^^^^^^^^^^
"is created" may be passive voice on line 37 at column 22
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ll items of which nature is composed, if this intellect were also vast
                         ^^^^^^^^^^^
"is composed" may be passive voice on line 42 at column 26
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this intellect were also vast
                         ^^^^
"vast" is a weasel word on line 42 at column 67
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and the future just like the past could be present before its eyes."
               ^^^^
"just" can weaken meaning on line 46 at column 15
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ider chaotic systems and things like the Butterfly
                         ^^^^^^
"things" can weaken meaning on line 53 at column 45
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"I, at any rate, am convinced that [God] does not throw dice" 
                 ^^^^^^^^^^^^
"am convinced" may be passive voice on line 76 at column 17
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ve functions depend upon many-world theories and superposition, but
                         ^^^^
"many" is a weasel word and can weaken meaning on line 81 at column 30
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Most scientific theories are grounded in an underlying dogmatism that
                         ^^^^^^^^^^^^
"are grounded" may be passive voice on line 87 at column 25
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scientific theories is done by isolating causes and measuring effects.
                    ^^^^^^^
"is done" may be passive voice on line 89 at column 20
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advances, there seems to be unexplained and seemingly random
                         ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
"be unexplained" may be passive voice on line 90 at column 53
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ou consider the world to be ruled by cause and effect and
                         ^^^^^^^^
"be ruled" may be passive voice on line 98 at column 34
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chaotic or completely random. It is not easy to create _truly_ random
           ^^^^^^^^^^
"completely" is a weasel word and can weaken meaning on line 99 at column 11
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ic or completely random. It is not easy to create _truly_ random
                         ^^^^^
"It is" is wordy or unneeded on line 99 at column 30


In ./syllabus.md
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nd social information to validate a design or process
                         ^^^^^^^^
"validate" is wordy or unneeded on line 54 at column 56
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obability and statistics is
                         ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
"is
recommended" may be passive voice on line 68 at column 69
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r Review and Feedback:** Evaluate peers' technical communication, specifically r
                         ^^^^^^^^
"Evaluate" is wordy or unneeded on line 83 at column 33
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 Discussions:** Actively participate in online
                         ^^^^^^^^^^^
"participate" is wordy or unneeded on line 84 at column 51
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l University regulations concerning the final exam.
                         ^^^^^^^^^^
"concerning" is wordy or unneeded on line 113 at column 63
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## Minimum Technical Skills: 
   ^^^^^^^
"Minimum" is wordy or unneeded on line 123 at column 3
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|Excellent|A|4|
 ^^^^^^^^^
"Excellent" is a weasel word on line 135 at column 1
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|Very Good|B+|3.3|
 ^^^^
"Very" is a weasel word and can weaken meaning on line 137 at column 1
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Deadlines are based on Eastern Time; if you are in a different time zone, please
          ^^^^^^^^^
"are based" may be passive voice on line 151 at column 10
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on date, its a 0. If you are
                         ^^^^^^^^^
"are
stuck" may be passive voice on line 158 at column 66
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stuck on a topic or requirement submit some questions you have about the
                    ^^^^^^^^^^^
"requirement" is wordy or unneeded on line 159 at column 20
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t student community, you are held to
                         ^^^^^^^^
"are held" may be passive voice on line 172 at column 68
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s and academic policies. In addition, there are numerous
                         ^^^^^^^^^^^
"In addition" is wordy or unneeded on line 173 at column 41
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. In addition, there are numerous
                         ^^^^^^^^
"numerous" is wordy or unneeded on line 173 at column 64
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niversity of Connecticut is committed to protecting the rights of
                         ^^^^^^^^^^^^
"is committed" may be passive voice on line 192 at column 30
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accessible.  If you anticipate or experience physical or academic barriers based
                    ^^^^^^^^^^
"anticipate" is wordy or unneeded on line 194 at column 20
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ancy, please let me know immediately so that we can
                         ^^^^^^^^^^^
"immediately" can weaken meaning on line 195 at column 47
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gh-speed internet with a minimum speed of 1.5
                         ^^^^^^^
"minimum" is wordy or unneeded on line 209 at column 49
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o technical and academic assistance.
                         ^^^^^^^^^^
"assistance" is wordy or unneeded on line 217 at column 109


In ./module_04/README.md
=============
These short explorations were meant to give you a small taste of
                         ^^^^^^^^^^
"were meant" may be passive voice on line 5 at column 33
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