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Improvements/Suggestions in "Me, Myself and I" #1

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PranavDani opened this issue Feb 27, 2023 · 0 comments
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Improvements/Suggestions in "Me, Myself and I" #1

PranavDani opened this issue Feb 27, 2023 · 0 comments

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PranavDani commented Feb 27, 2023

  • Remove one "work" in the third point.
  • Did you mean "venturing" on the fourth point?
  • I love taking micro-decisions while building things which can range from a small Easter egg to ... (Sixth point)

General observation - Most of your sentences start with an "I".
So if you want to improve your engagement or just intrigue the reader, you can switch the sentence structure to make it sound as if you already know them. In this case it sounds more friendly, if that's what you were looking for.

  • "sometimes I struggle/attempt to" Point 8 - "to" stays common for both the cases.

  • "Here's some of my work for you to checkout " - reframed

  • "anything and everything in tech"? Is that what you meant in the last point?

  • Get a domain for your email.

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