From 5c7c2f348ac22f4a4f3ef4902013263286f2366f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: joshkauffman <40213896+joshkauffman@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Thu, 4 Oct 2018 14:46:41 -0400
Subject: [PATCH 1/2] Propose edits

Line 5 - remove curly braces around `regaccount` as the curly braces are used to print a bit of information pulled from elsewhere. `regaccount` is the just the name of this contract.
Line 5 - also the Ethereum address and balance are both values that will be pulled.
Line 7 - Adding in the chain ID to show that the intent of the contract is to create an account here, and not on some other network. Give the full intention.
Line 11 - Added DR forum
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 .../ricardian contracts/eosio.unregd-regaccount-rc.md    | 9 ++++++---
 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/eosio.unregd/ricardian contracts/eosio.unregd-regaccount-rc.md b/eosio.unregd/ricardian contracts/eosio.unregd-regaccount-rc.md
index f3a1134..69bd04d 100644
--- a/eosio.unregd/ricardian contracts/eosio.unregd-regaccount-rc.md	
+++ b/eosio.unregd/ricardian contracts/eosio.unregd-regaccount-rc.md	
@@ -2,8 +2,11 @@
 
 ## Description
 
-The intent of the `{{ regaccount }}` action is to register an EOS account using the stored information (Ethereum address/balance) after verifying the submitted ETH signature.
+The intent of the `regaccount` action is to register an EOS account using the stored information {{ Ethereum address }} and {{ balance }} from the `eosio.unregd` contract, after verifying the submitted Ethereum {{ signature }}.
 
-As an authorized party I {{ signer }} wish to create an account {{ account }} accessible with EOS public key {{ eos_pubkey_str }} by submitting cryptographic proof {{ signature }} corresponding to the Ethereum address.
+As an authorized party, I {{ signer }} wish to create an account {{ account }} on the EOS chain with ID: aca376f206b8fc25a6ed44dbdc66547c36c6c33e3a119ffbeaef943642f0e906, accessible with EOS public key {{ eos_pubkey_str }} by submitting cryptographic proof {{ signature }} corresponding to the {{ Ethereum address }}.
+
+As signer, I stipulate that if I am not the beneficial owner of these tokens, I have proof that I’ve been authorized to take this action by their beneficial owner(s).
+
+In case of dispute, all cases should be brought to the EOS Core Arbitration Forum at https://eoscorearbitration.io/.
 
-As signer I stipulate that, if I am not the beneficial owner of these tokens, I have proof that I’ve been authorized to take this action by their beneficial owner(s).

From 65a066d688a71a058c369f675c92d4862fafde84 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: joshkauffman <40213896+joshkauffman@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Thu, 4 Oct 2018 15:14:34 -0400
Subject: [PATCH 2/2] Update eosio.unregd-regaccount-rc.md

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 eosio.unregd/ricardian contracts/eosio.unregd-regaccount-rc.md | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/eosio.unregd/ricardian contracts/eosio.unregd-regaccount-rc.md b/eosio.unregd/ricardian contracts/eosio.unregd-regaccount-rc.md
index 69bd04d..38002d9 100644
--- a/eosio.unregd/ricardian contracts/eosio.unregd-regaccount-rc.md	
+++ b/eosio.unregd/ricardian contracts/eosio.unregd-regaccount-rc.md	
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 
 ## Description
 
-The intent of the `regaccount` action is to register an EOS account using the stored information {{ Ethereum address }} and {{ balance }} from the `eosio.unregd` contract, after verifying the submitted Ethereum {{ signature }}.
+The intent of the `regaccount` action is to register an EOS account using the stored information {{ Ethereum address }} and token balance from the `eosio.unregd` contract, after verifying the submitted Ethereum {{ signature }}.
 
 As an authorized party, I {{ signer }} wish to create an account {{ account }} on the EOS chain with ID: aca376f206b8fc25a6ed44dbdc66547c36c6c33e3a119ffbeaef943642f0e906, accessible with EOS public key {{ eos_pubkey_str }} by submitting cryptographic proof {{ signature }} corresponding to the {{ Ethereum address }}.