Ambiguous what "promises" are referred to

[tieguy]

Various points in the text refer to the "promises" of Sec. 2 and Sec. 4, but it is ambiguous exactly what promises are referred to.

This could be a significant redrafting effort, but it might be worth pulling the promises into independent sections so that they can be referred to with more specificity in the rest of the document.

[NFKRZZ]

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