From 5372b2c953fa9403d598fd65509ad5f261eec8cf Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Florian Rivoal Date: Wed, 11 Oct 2023 09:27:33 +0900 Subject: [PATCH] Reorg long sentence as bulleted list --- index.bs | 21 +++++++++++++-------- 1 file changed, 13 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-) diff --git a/index.bs b/index.bs index 4f46f9b7..870dc075 100644 --- a/index.bs +++ b/index.bs @@ -3559,14 +3559,19 @@ Updating Mature Publications on the Recommendation Track
  • must obtain [=Team=] verification, or fulfill the criteria for [[#streamlined-update]]. - [=Team=] verification (a [=Team decision=]), - should be withheld if any Process requirements are not met, - and may be withheld in consideration of unresolved Formal Objections - (including any [=upheld=] by a [=Council=] but not yet [=fully addressed=]) - if the document does not adequately reflect all relevant decisions of the [=W3C Council=] (or its delegates), - or if the [=Team=] believes the [=Group=] is - not making reasonable progress - on addressing issues raised by individuals external to the [=Group=]. + [=Team=] verification (a [=Team decision=]): + * should be withheld + if any Process requirements are not met, + * may be withheld + in consideration of unresolved Formal Objections + (including any [=upheld=] by a [=Council=] but not yet [=fully addressed=]), + * may be withheld + if the document does not adequately reflect + all relevant decisions of the [=W3C Council=] (or its delegates), + * may be withheld + if the Team believes the Group is not making reasonable progress + on addressing issues raised by individuals external to the Group. + If the [=Team=] rejects an [=Update Request=], it must indicate its rationale to the [=Working Group=]. If it waives any Process requirements,