From baed87649fa20da2b14d34e8fccc33b02e20de8b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Florian Rivoal Date: Wed, 11 Oct 2023 09:21:42 +0900 Subject: [PATCH 1/3] Add requirement to make progress on external issues for update requests See #781 --- index.bs | 5 ++++- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/index.bs b/index.bs index 5b6b6cb1..c6942c18 100644 --- a/index.bs +++ b/index.bs @@ -3557,7 +3557,10 @@ Updating Mature Publications on the Recommendation Track should be withheld if any Process requirements are not met, and may be withheld in consideration of unresolved Formal Objections (including any [=upheld=] by a [=Council=] but not yet [=fully addressed=]) - or if the document does not adequately reflect all relevant decisions of the [=W3C Council=] (or its delegates). + if the document does not adequately reflect all relevant decisions of the [=W3C Council=] (or its delegates), + or if the [=Team=] believes the [=Group=] is + not making reasonable progress + on addressing issues raised by individuals external to the [=Group=]. If the [=Team=] rejects an [=Update Request=], it must indicate its rationale to the [=Working Group=]. If it waives any Process requirements, From 01b012bbb6614963e10b7cd4f95643227e380a65 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Florian Rivoal Date: Wed, 11 Oct 2023 09:27:33 +0900 Subject: [PATCH 2/3] Reorg long sentence as bulleted list --- index.bs | 21 +++++++++++++-------- 1 file changed, 13 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-) diff --git a/index.bs b/index.bs index c6942c18..151508a3 100644 --- a/index.bs +++ b/index.bs @@ -3553,14 +3553,19 @@ Updating Mature Publications on the Recommendation Track
  • must obtain [=Team=] verification, or fulfill the criteria for [[#streamlined-update]]. - [=Team=] verification (a [=Team decision=]), - should be withheld if any Process requirements are not met, - and may be withheld in consideration of unresolved Formal Objections - (including any [=upheld=] by a [=Council=] but not yet [=fully addressed=]) - if the document does not adequately reflect all relevant decisions of the [=W3C Council=] (or its delegates), - or if the [=Team=] believes the [=Group=] is - not making reasonable progress - on addressing issues raised by individuals external to the [=Group=]. + [=Team=] verification (a [=Team decision=]): + * should be withheld + if any Process requirements are not met, + * may be withheld + in consideration of unresolved Formal Objections + (including any [=upheld=] by a [=Council=] but not yet [=fully addressed=]), + * may be withheld + if the document does not adequately reflect + all relevant decisions of the [=W3C Council=] (or its delegates), + * may be withheld + if the Team believes the Group is not making reasonable progress + on addressing issues raised by individuals external to the Group. + If the [=Team=] rejects an [=Update Request=], it must indicate its rationale to the [=Working Group=]. If it waives any Process requirements, From f1200d2426d09578b7ccb16bfe705513bb335d3b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Florian Rivoal Date: Wed, 11 Oct 2023 23:58:49 +0900 Subject: [PATCH 3/3] phrasing tweak Co-authored-by: Ted Thibodeau Jr --- index.bs | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/index.bs b/index.bs index 151508a3..fd59ebb1 100644 --- a/index.bs +++ b/index.bs @@ -3561,7 +3561,7 @@ Updating Mature Publications on the Recommendation Track (including any [=upheld=] by a [=Council=] but not yet [=fully addressed=]), * may be withheld if the document does not adequately reflect - all relevant decisions of the [=W3C Council=] (or its delegates), + all relevant decisions of a [=W3C Council=] (or its delegates), * may be withheld if the Team believes the Group is not making reasonable progress on addressing issues raised by individuals external to the Group.