Proofreading - The Marketplace section

[NicoletaComan]

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[MarkvanMents]

Hi @NicoletaComan
Sorry it has taken so long to review this. I have started - see my comments so far. I'll try to continue tomorrow or next week.
Looks like some good changes and you have found things which have slipped through our change processes which is great.
If you want to change anything before I continue, based on my comments, let me know. Otherwise I'll continue as quickly as I can.

[MarkvanMents]

Hi Nicoleta,
This is a huge PR. My ask in the original list was to review the Marketplace home page rather than the whole of the Marketplace.
There are lots of good things here - I have added a few comments below. Most of these are picking up things which were already in the doc and are probably more for a second pass rather than necessarily needing to be addressed in this proofreading round.
In general the changes are good and I don't think it is necessary, or a good use of my time, to review the whole PR. Please can you take another look at what you have done and come back to me if you feel that you need to discuss anything which has changed in priority or in some other way.

This is a huge piece of work - well done. However, in future, I would suggest that this number of changes is split into several smaller PRs. This makes it easier to review and less likely to end up with conflicts.

Let me know if you have any questions.

[NicoletaComan]

Thank you for the review!
I have applied the requested changes, and I will merge this PR.