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Major updates #258
Major updates #258
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…g mydb in one case. - No more need for static data files, deleted all. - Redone much of query and bookkeeping logic to simplify workflows. Shorted the NB a lot. - Renamed the ipynb file. - Rewrote Goals and Intro. - Cleaned up Imports. - Updated figures and figure-making functions. - Added docstrings to many functions. - Added/rewrote/streamlined story-telling text across the NB. - Synced TOCs with NB headings.
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I just added to this PR: nbid.csv with this NB ID added (0068), and updated keywords.txt. |
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Just a few corrections and non-critical suggestions on a very fast check:
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In "Summary", change "currently under way on the CTIO Blanco 4m telescope" with "currently under way on the NOIRLab/Kitt Peak Mayall 4m telescope".
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Adding the acronym after each survey would be helpful (DECaLS, BASS, MzLS) for people to recognize or look them up more quickly.
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I would say, drop the ", including" from "...from the overview paper, including:" since that seems to imply you will next mention a few of the plots made in the notebook, not all of them, which is the case after the colon. Or, replace it with "which are".
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Change "Fig 1: Query the catalogs..." with "Fig 2: Query the catalogs...".
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In the first figure (Fig. 2) I wonder is there's a way to get a white background, much more desirable than dark grey. I noticed this is introduced by the masked_less_equal function on values=0 (and I didn't find a parameter to change it to white or none) which was done in order to eventually plot with a logarithmic scale, but we are not doing that here. Do you think that's necessary? Maybe commenting or removing that m_masked definition and plotting m instead of m_masked?
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Typo: change "query that positinally JOINs" with "query that positionally joins".
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Maybe the timeout=600 is not necessary any longer when defining dfx, since it went down to few seconds?
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In plotting Fig. 8: I still prefer the look with nbins = 300 instead of 100, but I guess it's fine either way.
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Typo: In Fig 15. first cell, change "which contai information" with "which contain information"
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In plotting Fig. 15, I would change 'violet' with 'purple'. That violet looks like a faint pink, gets too low of a profile in the plot compared to the other lines.
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In first block of Fig 16: I would replace those ';' with ':' in the first sentence.
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Typo: same block, replace "Finallu" with "Finally".
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Typo: same block, replace "selectred" with "selected".
Thanks @kareninysimba , working on those now.. |
@kareninysimba Implemented and pushed all changes, except: - In the first figure (Fig. 2) I wonder is there's a way to get a white background, much more desirable than dark grey. I noticed this is introduced by the masked_less_equal function on values=0 (and I didn't find a parameter to change it to white or none) which was done in order to eventually plot with a logarithmic scale, but we are not doing that here. Do you think that's necessary? Maybe commenting or removing that m_masked definition and plotting m instead of m_masked? --> I was trying something that works in matplotlib:
but alas it doesn't work in hp.projview yet. Removed the masked array part as per your suggestion. - Maybe the timeout=600 is not necessary any longer when defining dfx, since it went down to few seconds? --> I've been running the queries many many times over the past few days, and when the machines/services were busy, the runtime could grow quite a bit. Let's leave the timeout at 600 just in case. - In plotting Fig. 8: I still prefer the look with nbins = 300 instead of 100, but I guess it's fine either way. --> With 300, the relation gets very tight, and one doesn't see the smeared-out broader distribution. Decided to keep it at 100. - In plotting Fig. 15, I would change 'violet' with 'purple'. That violet looks like a faint pink, gets too low of a profile in the plot compared to the other lines. --> Purple looks so close to both red and blue. How about a compromise of "awesome orange"? |
Sounds good. I try it and awesome orange seems fine :) |
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I still see the semicolons in the first paragraph of Fig. 16 section (last plot). I still think is better to replace them with colons, i.e. change
...EXP (exponential disk; spiral galaxies), or DEV (de Vaucouleurs profile; elliptical galaxies)
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...EXP (exponential disk: spiral galaxies), or DEV (de Vaucouleurs profile: elliptical galaxies)
Semicolon is eventually to separate ideas/sentences more or less semi-related or unrelated
You can also use "i.e." to replace the ";"
Hi all! This notebook looks really good. I didn't get any errors running it, I verified that all the links work, and the code looks solid. I only found a few spelling/grammar mistakes. Here is my feedback for DESILegacySurveys.ipynb:
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Thank you @bmerino95 , I implemented your comments. Please approve and I'll merge. |
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The notebook looks good, and I have verified that the changes have been made.
Thank you @bmerino95 , merging! |
🎉🕺🏻🎊🕺🏻🎈🕺🏻 |
The commit message:
@kareninysimba @jacquesalice @bmerino95 can you please give this a review? If you only have minor comments, we can merge and feature this in the AAS Newsletter. If you find major issues, we'd have to push for a later release. Thank you!