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 # SudoStake Liquidity Vaults
 
-A vault is a smart contract account that gives the account owner more flexibility around their staked tokens.
+A vault is a smart contract account that gives owners more flexibility around their staked tokens.
 
-As more stakers manage their assets using vaults, it creates for a more distributed stakeholder base, which increases the overall network security.
+As more stakers manage their assets using vaults, it creates a more distributed stakeholder base, which increases the overall network security.
 
 
  
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 Bob owns a vault that has 100k $TOKENS staked earning roughly 1,000 $TOKENS per month.
 
-Bob requests $2,800 USDC.
+Bob requests $2,800.
 
 In exchange, the liquidity provider gets to claim the staking rewards generated by the vault for the next 90 days.
 
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 ### Fixed-interest Rentals
 
-Bob owns a vault that has 100k $TOKENS staked earning roughly 1,000 $TOKENS per month.
+Bob owns a vault with 100k $TOKENS staked, earning roughly 1,000 $TOKENS monthly.
 
-Bob requests $2,800 USDC.
+Bob requests $2,800.
 
 In exchange, the liquidity provider gets to claim 3,000 $TOKENS generated by the vault over time, before full ownership of the vault is returned to Bob.
 
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 ## Who can fund liquidity requests?
 
-1. Individuals with $USDC liquidity interested in trading with a vault owner.
+1. Individuals with $USDC liquidity are interested in trading with a vault owner.
 2. DAOs managing $USDC as part of their investment strategy, lending to vault owners.
 3. Institutions lending to vault owners as part of their investment strategy.