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Fixed some german translations. Changed statements from Raspberry Pi … #37

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…3 to Raspberry Pi.

I fixed some german descriptions. I also changed some statements in the english and french versions because the instructions for the microSD card do not work only with the Raspberry Pi 3 but all Raspberry Pi versions.

I found that the linked power supply is wrong if you have a Raspberry Pi 4B. We should also change some pictures because currently the best device should be the Raspberry Pi 4B.

Best regards, Ralf

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Many thanks. Would you please fix the case of URLs?


Wir empfehlen das [offizielle Netzteil](https://www.raspberrypi.org/products/raspberry-pi-universal-power-supply/) der Raspberry Foundation und eine microSD-Karte mit geprüfter Leistung, z.B. [von Wirecutter empfohlen](http://thewirecutter.com/reviews/best-microsd-card/). Die Verwendung anderer Netzteile sowie von microSD-Karten aus zweifelhaften Quellen kann zu systematischen Störungen führen, für die __keine Unterstützung geleistet werden kann__.
Wir empfehlen das [offizielle Netzteil](https://www.raspberrypi.org/products/raspberry-pi-universal-power-supply/) der Raspberry Foundation und eine microSD-Karte mit geprüfter Qualität, z.B. [von Wirecutter empfohlen](http://thewirecutter.com/reviews/best-microSD-card/). Die Verwendung anderer Netzteile sowie von microSD-Karten aus zweifelhaften Quellen kann zu systematischen Störungen führen, für die __keine Unterstützung geleistet werden kann__.
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Wir empfehlen das [offizielle Netzteil](https://www.raspberrypi.org/products/raspberry-pi-universal-power-supply/) der Raspberry Foundation und eine microSD-Karte mit geprüfter Qualität, z.B. [von Wirecutter empfohlen](http://thewirecutter.com/reviews/best-microSD-card/). Die Verwendung anderer Netzteile sowie von microSD-Karten aus zweifelhaften Quellen kann zu systematischen Störungen führen, für die __keine Unterstützung geleistet werden kann__.
Wir empfehlen das [offizielle Netzteil](https://www.raspberrypi.org/products/raspberry-pi-universal-power-supply/) der Raspberry Foundation und eine microSD-Karte mit geprüfter Qualität, z.B. [von Wirecutter empfohlen](https://thewirecutter.com/reviews/best-microsd-card/). Die Verwendung anderer Netzteile sowie von microSD-Karten aus zweifelhaften Quellen kann zu systematischen Störungen führen, für die __keine Unterstützung geleistet werden kann__.

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Please do not change case in URLs.

{{< /notice >}}

[RPi3Aplus]: https://www.raspberrypi.org/products/raspberry-pi-3-model-a-plus/
[RPi3B]: https://www.raspberrypi.org/products/raspberry-pi-3-model-b/
[RPi3Bplus]: https://www.raspberrypi.org/products/raspberry-pi-3-model-b-plus/
[RPi4B]: https://www.raspberrypi.org/products/raspberry-pi-4-model-b/
[case]: https://www.raspberrypi.org/products/raspberry-pi-3-case/
[sdcard]: https://thewirecutter.com/reviews/best-microsd-card/
[sdcard]: https://thewirecutter.com/reviews/best-microSD-card/
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[sdcard]: https://thewirecutter.com/reviews/best-microSD-card/
[sdcard]: https://thewirecutter.com/reviews/best-microsd-card/

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See above


Wir empfehlen das [offizielle Netzteil](https://www.raspberrypi.org/products/raspberry-pi-universal-power-supply/) der Raspberry Foundation und eine microSD-Karte mit geprüfter Leistung, z.B. [von Wirecutter empfohlen](http://thewirecutter.com/reviews/best-microsd-card/). Die Verwendung anderer Netzteile sowie von microSD-Karten aus zweifelhaften Quellen kann zu systematischen Störungen führen, für die __keine Unterstützung geleistet werden kann__.
Wir empfehlen das [offizielle Netzteil](https://www.raspberrypi.org/products/raspberry-pi-universal-power-supply/) der Raspberry Foundation und eine microSD-Karte mit geprüfter Leistung, z.B. [von Wirecutter empfohlen](http://thewirecutter.com/reviews/best-microSD-card/). Die Verwendung anderer Netzteile sowie von microSD-Karten aus zweifelhaften Quellen kann zu systematischen Störungen führen, für die __keine Unterstützung geleistet werden kann__.
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Wir empfehlen das [offizielle Netzteil](https://www.raspberrypi.org/products/raspberry-pi-universal-power-supply/) der Raspberry Foundation und eine microSD-Karte mit geprüfter Leistung, z.B. [von Wirecutter empfohlen](http://thewirecutter.com/reviews/best-microSD-card/). Die Verwendung anderer Netzteile sowie von microSD-Karten aus zweifelhaften Quellen kann zu systematischen Störungen führen, für die __keine Unterstützung geleistet werden kann__.
Wir empfehlen das [offizielle Netzteil](https://www.raspberrypi.org/products/raspberry-pi-universal-power-supply/) der Raspberry Foundation und eine microSD-Karte mit geprüfter Leistung, z.B. [von Wirecutter empfohlen](https://thewirecutter.com/reviews/best-microsd-card/). Die Verwendung anderer Netzteile sowie von microSD-Karten aus zweifelhaften Quellen kann zu systematischen Störungen führen, für die __keine Unterstützung geleistet werden kann__.

@@ -39,13 +39,13 @@ The total hardware amount is approximately USD 90, 80 € or CHF 90.
{{< notice tip >}}
Selecting a __good quality__ microSD card and an adequate power supply are __essential__ for the proper operation of the MoodleBox.

We recommend the [official Raspberry Foundation power supply](https://www.raspberrypi.org/products/raspberry-pi-universal-power-supply/) and a microSD card with tested performance, for example [those recommended by Wirecutter](http://thewirecutter.com/reviews/best-microsd-card/). The use of other power supplies, as well as microSD cards from dubious sources, can cause systematic malfunctions, for which __no support can be provided__.
We recommend the [official Raspberry Foundation power supply](https://www.raspberrypi.org/products/raspberry-pi-universal-power-supply/) and a microSD card with tested performance, for example [those recommended by Wirecutter](http://thewirecutter.com/reviews/best-microSD-card/). The use of other power supplies, as well as microSD cards from dubious sources, can cause systematic malfunctions, for which __no support can be provided__.
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We recommend the [official Raspberry Foundation power supply](https://www.raspberrypi.org/products/raspberry-pi-universal-power-supply/) and a microSD card with tested performance, for example [those recommended by Wirecutter](http://thewirecutter.com/reviews/best-microSD-card/). The use of other power supplies, as well as microSD cards from dubious sources, can cause systematic malfunctions, for which __no support can be provided__.
We recommend the [official Raspberry Foundation power supply](https://www.raspberrypi.org/products/raspberry-pi-universal-power-supply/) and a microSD card with tested performance, for example [those recommended by Wirecutter](https://thewirecutter.com/reviews/best-microsd-card/). The use of other power supplies, as well as microSD cards from dubious sources, can cause systematic malfunctions, for which __no support can be provided__.

{{< /notice >}}

[RPi3Aplus]: https://www.raspberrypi.org/products/raspberry-pi-3-model-a-plus/
[RPi3B]: https://www.raspberrypi.org/products/raspberry-pi-3-model-b/
[RPi3Bplus]: https://www.raspberrypi.org/products/raspberry-pi-3-model-b-plus/
[RPi4B]: https://www.raspberrypi.org/products/raspberry-pi-4-model-b/
[case]: https://www.raspberrypi.org/products/raspberry-pi-3-case/
[sdcard]: https://thewirecutter.com/reviews/best-microsd-card/
[sdcard]: https://thewirecutter.com/reviews/best-microSD-card/
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[sdcard]: https://thewirecutter.com/reviews/best-microSD-card/
[sdcard]: https://thewirecutter.com/reviews/best-microsd-card/


{{< notice tip >}}
Selecting a __good quality__ microSD card and an adequate power supply are __essential__ for the proper operation of the MoodleBox.

We recommend the [official Raspberry Foundation power supply](https://www.raspberrypi.org/products/raspberry-pi-universal-power-supply/) and a microSD card with tested performance, for example [those recommended by Wirecutter](http://thewirecutter.com/reviews/best-microsd-card/). The use of other power supplies, as well as microSD cards from dubious sources, can cause systematic malfunctions, for which __no support can be provided__.
We recommend the [official Raspberry Foundation power supply](https://www.raspberrypi.org/products/raspberry-pi-universal-power-supply/) and a microSD card with tested performance, for example [those recommended by Wirecutter](http://thewirecutter.com/reviews/best-microSD-card/). The use of other power supplies, as well as microSD cards from dubious sources, can cause systematic malfunctions, for which __no support can be provided__.
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We recommend the [official Raspberry Foundation power supply](https://www.raspberrypi.org/products/raspberry-pi-universal-power-supply/) and a microSD card with tested performance, for example [those recommended by Wirecutter](http://thewirecutter.com/reviews/best-microSD-card/). The use of other power supplies, as well as microSD cards from dubious sources, can cause systematic malfunctions, for which __no support can be provided__.
We recommend the [official Raspberry Foundation power supply](https://www.raspberrypi.org/products/raspberry-pi-universal-power-supply/) and a microSD card with tested performance, for example [those recommended by Wirecutter](https://thewirecutter.com/reviews/best-microsd-card/). The use of other power supplies, as well as microSD cards from dubious sources, can cause systematic malfunctions, for which __no support can be provided__.

@@ -39,13 +39,13 @@ La totalité de l'investissement matériel nécessaire est d'environ 80 €, US
{{< notice tip >}}
Le choix d'une carte microSD de __bonne qualité__ ainsi que d'une alimentation électrique adéquate sont __essentiels__ pour le bon fonctionnement de la MoodleBox.

Nous recommandons l'[alimentation officielle](https://www.raspberrypi.org/products/raspberry-pi-universal-power-supply/) de la Fondation Raspberry et une carte microSD disposant de performances éprouvées, par exemple celles qui sont [recommandées par Wirecutter](http://thewirecutter.com/reviews/best-microsd-card/). L'utilisation d'autres alimentations, ainsi que de cartes microSD de provenances douteuses peuvent être en effet la cause de dysfonctionnements systématiques, pour lesquels __aucune assistance ne peut être assurée__.
Nous recommandons l'[alimentation officielle](https://www.raspberrypi.org/products/raspberry-pi-universal-power-supply/) de la Fondation Raspberry et une carte microSD disposant de performances éprouvées, par exemple celles qui sont [recommandées par Wirecutter](http://thewirecutter.com/reviews/best-microSD-card/). L'utilisation d'autres alimentations, ainsi que de cartes microSD de provenances douteuses peuvent être en effet la cause de dysfonctionnements systématiques, pour lesquels __aucune assistance ne peut être assurée__.
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Nous recommandons l'[alimentation officielle](https://www.raspberrypi.org/products/raspberry-pi-universal-power-supply/) de la Fondation Raspberry et une carte microSD disposant de performances éprouvées, par exemple celles qui sont [recommandées par Wirecutter](http://thewirecutter.com/reviews/best-microSD-card/). L'utilisation d'autres alimentations, ainsi que de cartes microSD de provenances douteuses peuvent être en effet la cause de dysfonctionnements systématiques, pour lesquels __aucune assistance ne peut être assurée__.
Nous recommandons l'[alimentation officielle](https://www.raspberrypi.org/products/raspberry-pi-universal-power-supply/) de la Fondation Raspberry et une carte microSD disposant de performances éprouvées, par exemple celles qui sont [recommandées par Wirecutter](https://thewirecutter.com/reviews/best-microsd-card/). L'utilisation d'autres alimentations, ainsi que de cartes microSD de provenances douteuses peuvent être en effet la cause de dysfonctionnements systématiques, pour lesquels __aucune assistance ne peut être assurée__.

{{< /notice >}}

[RPi3Aplus]: https://www.raspberrypi.org/products/raspberry-pi-3-model-a-plus/
[RPi3B]: https://www.raspberrypi.org/products/raspberry-pi-3-model-b/
[RPi3Bplus]: https://www.raspberrypi.org/products/raspberry-pi-3-model-b-plus/
[RPi4B]: https://www.raspberrypi.org/products/raspberry-pi-4-model-b/
[case]: https://www.raspberrypi.org/products/raspberry-pi-3-case/
[sdcard]: https://thewirecutter.com/reviews/best-microsd-card/
[sdcard]: https://thewirecutter.com/reviews/best-microSD-card/
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[sdcard]: https://thewirecutter.com/reviews/best-microSD-card/
[sdcard]: https://thewirecutter.com/reviews/best-microsd-card/

@martignoni martignoni merged commit eaeed76 into moodlebox:master Apr 25, 2020
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